Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 31, 2020
The Third Wheel from Diary of a wimpy
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Wow Emily I want to have that book. You keep up the good work.(*0*)
ReplyDeleteHi Emily i have all the Wimpy Kid books and wimpy kid is my favourite book and good work :)
ReplyDeleteHi Emily, I really like how you've set it out on slides and told us a brief description of your story. I wonder if next time you could add a little more detail and explain the characters and setting? You may get more people wanting to read your book! Keep up the great posting :)
ReplyDeleteSalaam Emily
ReplyDeleteMy name is Amara and I am in Waitemata from Waikowhai Primary School. WOW! I really liked that you put on your slideshow. It reminds me of when I read the third wheel. Maybe next time you could add more slides. Visit my blog on http://wpsamaram.blogspot.com/.
Blog you later!